Question

【题目】书面表达

亲爱的同学们，课余时间、周末、假期，你们通常都是怎样度过的呢？请以“My Free Time”为题，写一篇短文。

信息提示：1、根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译；

2、文中不得出现真实的人名或校名；

3、词数为50~100。文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time.

Answer 1

【答案】 My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and studybetter. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it is a good way to relax myself. Of course , I help myparents with the housework at the weekends .I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文题材紧扣学生生活，学生有自我发挥的空间。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘话题内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章思路清晰，自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。