Question

13．Write at least 60words about the topic"My opinion on copying others'homework"（以"我对抄袭他们人作业的看法"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
注意：
1．短文必须包含下列三大点；
2．第一至第三要点必须包含1--2个列表中所给词语，但第三点要适当发挥；
3．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．

1）The main reason （主要原因）	a large amount of homework，difficult to work out，lazy
2）The harms （危害）	a bad habit，be against the rules of the school
3）Your views （你的看法）	be honest，work hard

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
My opinion on copying other's homework
It is known to us all that some students copy other's homeworkThere are several reasons for thisphenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which isdifficult to work out needs to be done every day．Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish theendless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms ofgetting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hardto finish all the homework on our own as well．As a saying goes"practicemakes perfect"．If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessonsthrough doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"为题说说抄袭作业的原因和危害．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．原因；作业多，难，懒惰
2．危害；坏习惯，违反校规
3．我的打算；诚实，努力学习
常用到的重点短语：
be going to  打算…
and so on 等等
of course 当然
take photos照相
【高分句型】
1．The main reason is①that a large amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done every day．主要的原因是，大量的家庭作业，这是很难解决的需要每天都做．
①that引导表语从句； a large amount of 大量的，后跟不可数名词
②which引导的定语从句，修饰先行词homework，在从句中作逻辑主语．
2．①If we②keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．如果我们通过做作业继续练习和复习功课，我们可以在我们的考试中做得很好．
①if引导的条件状语从句，从句时态用一般现在时表将来．
②keep doing sth继续做某事

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
    It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done every day．【高分句型一】【抄作业的原因】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．【抄作业的危害】As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hardto finish all the homework on our own as well．As a saying goes"practicemakes perfect"．If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．【高分句型二】【我的打算】

点评 这是一篇提纲作文，文章的题目已经给出，而且列出了三条细节．写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到．要注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．