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16．众所周知，控制情绪，保持积极乐观的心态，才能让生活充满幸福和快乐．那么如何让自己幸福快乐呢？本期英语黑板报的"Think and Write"栏目的征稿话题就是"Learn to Control Your Feelings"．请结合表格中的提示，写下你的感悟与大家一起分享吧．

The importance of controlling feelings	Controlling feelings is important．
	We can find better ways to solve the problem．
	Controlling feelings can help to make friends with more people．
	Bad feelings can cause some trouble．

注意：1．词数80左右．        2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
3．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Learn  to  Control  Your  Feelings
Nobody can be happy all the time．If something badhappens to you，what will you do？Will you get angry？
Ithink at that time you should control your feelings．Controlling feelings isimportant to us all．If we control our feelings well，we can find what causedthe problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem．Alsocontrolling feelings can help us to make friends with more people．Bad feelingscan make you lose friends and cause you some trouble．So we should learn tocontrol our feelings and make our life happier．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"Learn to Control Your Feelings"为题写下你对如何控制情绪的感悟与大家一起分享．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．控制情绪是重要的；
2．找到更好的方式去解决问题；
3．控制情绪能帮助交到更多的朋友
4．坏情绪能引起一些麻烦．
常用到的重点短语：
help sb to do sth  帮助某人做某事
make friends 交朋友
make sb do sth 让某人做某事
make …adj 让…怎么样
【高分句型】
1．I think at that time you should control your feelings．
think后省略了引导词that的宾语从句
2．①If we control our feelings well，we can find ②what caused the problem and then we can find better ways ③to solve the problem．
①if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词can，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．
②find后是what引导的宾语从句．
③动词不定式做后置定语，修饰先行词ways．
3．Also ①controlling feelings can②help us to make friends with more people．
①动名词短语作主语．
②help sb to do sth  帮助某人做某事
③make friends 交朋友

解答 Learn to Control Feelings
   Nobody can be happy all the time．If something bad happens to you，what will you do？Will you get angry？
   I think at that time you should control your feelings．【高分句型】Controlling feelings is important to us all．（控制情绪是重要的）If we control our feelings well，we can find what caused the problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem．【高分句型】（找到更好的方式去解决问题）Also controlling feelings can help us to make friends with more people．【高分句型】（控制情绪能帮助交到更多的朋友）Bad feelings can make you lose friends and cause you some trouble．（坏情绪能引起一些麻烦）So we should learn to control our feelings and make our life happier．

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时态及情态动词的表达方式．联系实际，例举控制情绪的好处，建议人们学会控制自己的感情．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
这篇短文使用了一些过渡词，and then，also，So为文章增色不少．写作时就可以适当运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．