Question

8．请以"My best friend---"为题，写一篇短文．
要求：1可从外形，性格，爱好方面进行介绍．
2意思连贯，通顺，不得出现真实人名或学校名称，词数60
3围绕主题，适当发挥．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①She is always ready to help others，so she has lots of friends．她总是乐于助人，所以她有很多朋友．句子中be ready to do sth表示准备做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．
②She is good at English and she often helps our classmates with their English．她擅长英语，经常帮助同学学习英语．句子中be good at表示擅长做某事，help sb with sth表示帮着某人做某事．

解答 My best friend
I have a lot of friends and my best friend is Tina．（引出话题）She is from the USA．She is fourteen years old．We are in the same class．She is tall and thin．She always wears a pair of small and round glasses and she is often wearing black clothes．She is kind and generous．She is always ready to help others，so she has lots of friends．（高分句型） （介绍她的一些个人信息）She is good at English and she often helps our classmates with their English（高分句型）（介绍她的特长）．Everyone in my class likes her．She wants to be a social worker when she grows up．（介绍她的理想）

点评 这篇范文内容完整，意思连贯，是一篇比较好的作文．文中开门见山的点明了自己的好朋友是Tina，然后对Tina的外形、性格、爱好等做了详细的介绍，使我们对Tina有了一个初步的了解．这篇作文在写作时严格按照了题目中所列出的要点，逐条翻译，这样做可以避免遗漏要点，但同时又使得文章太琐碎，缺少连贯性．写作时可以将相似的要点归类表达，使文章的意思更加连贯．