Question

【题目】假设你参加了一个暑假去偏远地区(a remote areA、和小朋友们生活一段时间的志愿者项目。出发之前你希望得到更多一些关于项目的信息。你列了一张表，请决定你最希望了解的1至2个关键问题，然后写一封信给组织者Mr. Prince, 请求他的帮助（信件格式已给，标点符号不占格，至少60个字。）

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr Prince,

It is my great honor and privilege to participate in the volunteer program in a remote area during the summer vacation. Frankly speaking, I will appreciate it a lot if you offer me more detailed information. To start with, the more I prepare, the fewer problems I will probably have. As a result, what I am definitely eager to know are the things I need to prepare for the program. Besides, medical care, in my mind, is of great importance for the reason that it will enable me to get rid of the illness due to the unpredictable weather there. Hopefully, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and I am deeply convinced that the volunteer program will make my life more colorful and meaningful.

sincerely Yours ,

Jack

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信作文。写作要求明确，提示清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式、短语和过度词，这为文章增添了文采和层次感。