Question

日前，深圳市交警局发出通告，除了快餐、电信抢修等部分特殊行业用车外，个人电动车将被禁止在深圳规定路段行驶。对于“限电令”，大家的意见各不相同：不赞成者认为电动车给人带来很多方便，它便捷、便宜、环保；赞成者认为电动车扰乱交通秩序，而且危险。你的想法是什么？请你就此写一篇作文。

要求：

(1)条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

(2) 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Shenzhen City Police Bureau announced that personal electrical bikes would be forbidden. Different people have different ideas. ______________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Shenzhen City Police Bureau announced that personal electrical bikes would be forbidden. Different people have different ideas. Some people disagree with the idea. Here are the reasons. Firstly, electrical bikes offer people much convenience. For example, they are easy to park and cheap compared with the cars. Secondly, they will not cause any kind of pollution. While some other people think it is a good idea to forbid the electrical bikes. In their opinion, some people don't obey the traffic rules when they ride their electrical bikes and this can cause traffic jams. Besides, it is dangerous to ride electrical bikes. In my opinion, forbidding electrical bikes is not a good idea, but people must obey the rules and be more careful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。根据提纲内容可知，本文可分三部分来写对“限电令”的看法，第一部分是反对的观点和原因，第二部分是赞成的观点和原因，第三部分是作者本人的观点和原因。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如firstly、secconly、for example、compare with、while、in my opinion、besides 、but等词语，还有宾语从句Shenzhen City Police Bureau announced that personal electrical bikes would be forbidden，While some other people think it is a good idea to forbid the electrical bikes，状语从句some people don't obey the traffic rules when they ride their electrical bikes and this can cause traffic jams。 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。