Question

【题目】文段表达。

66．每个人都有自己心目中的英雄。谁是你心中的英雄?他/她有哪些令你钦佩的事迹？你从他/她身上学到了什么？《二十一世纪学生英文报》正在举办以“The Hero in My Heart”为题的征文比赛活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇不少于50词的征文参加此次比赛。所给提示词语供选用。

提示词语：kind, patient, help , encourage, think

The Hero in My Heart

Everyone has the hero in his heart.

Answer 1

【答案】

The Hero in My Heart

Everyone has his hero in his heart. My hero is my grandpa. My grandpa is a simple maths teacher. He is very kind and patient.

When I was a child, I always thought to be weak because I'm thin and weak in sports and maths. Not only my teachers and classmates, but also my mother always scolds that how stupid I was. But grandpa didn't think so. He always said to me, "Don't give up, just try again". Besides, he also helped me with maths. Because of his patient and good teaching, I found maths was so interesting and became good at it day by day. Because of his encouragement, I overcome lots of difficulties and find back my confidence.

In a word, he is the greatest man in my heart. He tells me how to grow as a person through his action and words. I love my grandpa very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者写自己心目中的英雄。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Not only my teachers and classmates, but also my mother always scolds that how stupid I was.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。