Question

【题目】书面表达。

学校将举办“A Summer for Better English”活动。请你从下面的推荐书单中选择 2 本想阅 读的书刊，然后用英语写一篇短文说明你的选择意向及理由，在学校的 English Corner 分享。

A list of books for English skills and fun

Basic English Writing

Secrets of English Words

A Guide to English Listening

20 Topics for English Speaking

Treasure Island

?Robinson Crusoe

Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland

?Time for Kids (a magazine)

注意：（1）必须从书单中选择 2 本书刊，并阐述理由。

（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

（3）词数：80~100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

短文首句：To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer.

Answer 1

【答案】To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. Of all the suggested books, I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids.

The first one is a book which may help use English words better. By reading this book, I will surely learn more new words. This will make my future study much easier. Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. So it must be great fun reading it.

By being part of this activity, I am expecting a big step forward in my English.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，话题是从下面的推荐书单中选择 2本想阅读的书刊，然后用英语写一篇短文说明你的选择意向及理由。最好选择自己熟悉的两本书刊，以便有话可说，然后根据书籍的内容介绍选择这些书的原因，及对自己英语提高的帮助。本文主要时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时，尽量避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意：1. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；3. 词数：80~100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。使用了较高级句型—定语从句，为文章增色不少，例如①The first one is a book which may help use English words better. 第一本是一本可以帮助更好地使用英语单词的书。这是定语从句，先行词是book，是物，可以用引导词that或which引导。②Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. 《儿童时代》是一本专为学生编写的通俗杂志，在这本杂志里我将阅读有趣的故事，领略国外的青少年生活。这是一句非限制定语从句，先行词magazine，是物，非限制定语从句中先行词是物，引导词只能用which，in which：在这本杂志里。