Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

三年初中学习生活即将结束，请以“My Middle School Life”为题写一篇80个词左右的短文，回顾自己的中学生活。

提示：1. 刚进入初中的时候学习不够努力、学习成绩不好。

2. 在老师和同学的帮助下各方面进步很大，对英语也有兴趣了。

3. 后来还参加了学校的篮球俱乐部和英语俱乐部并学到很多东西。

4. 以后的打算。

5. ·····

Answer 1

【答案】

My Middle School Life

How time flies!It’s not long before we graduate from our junior high school. Now let me tell you something about my middle school life.

Three years ago, when I first went into junior high school, I didn’t work hard and I always got bad grades. My parents got angry with me, my teachers worried about me. And I often felt sad. When I was in Grate 8, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I made much progress. I did well in my study. What’s more, I got interested in studying English. Later I joined the school basketball club and the English club. I was not only happy but also learned a lot in the clubs.

Several months later, I will be in senior high school. I can’t believe how the time went by! When I get into the senior high school, I will study harder and join the swimming team. I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me. And I believe I can do it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的学校生活。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构。注意一些常见句式的应用，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了作者刚进初中时候的学习情况，接下来介绍和同学的相处情况，最后参加学校的各种活动及将来的打算。此处用了I made much progress. I did well in my study；I can’t believe how the time went by等这些句子的运用也让文章增色不少。