Question

【题目】书面表达

时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。

要求：

l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；

2.不少于60词。

提示：

l. What did you use to be like?

2. What is the most important change?

3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.

I have changed a lot!

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Answer 1

【答案】Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.

I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.

Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!

【解析】

本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是怎么发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。本篇文章，首先开篇点题，我有很多变化，我最大的变化是我对待英语学习态度的变化。第二段是文章的主体，先描述过去学习英语的状况，其中用到表达过去常用的句型used to do ;在妈妈及老师的帮助下，我的英语学习发生了很大变化，具体表现为I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后对以上变化进行总结，并指出对于这个变化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章内容符合要求，时态用云正确，思路清晰，结构完整，是一篇不错的文章。