Question

【题目】书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）

右侧是一份英语学习自我评价表，每个评价项目后有若干个选项，请在符合自己实际情况的选项框中打√（可以多选）。根据你的选择，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇短文。介绍你英语学习的优势与不足，并针对自己的不足之处，提出改进方法。

注意：1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

2. 词数在80左右，短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

My English Learning

English is a very important subject at school.

Answer 1

【答案】

My English Learning

possible version

English is very important at school. With the help of the teacher, my English has improved a lot. I can remember most of the words I have learned. Of all activities I like pair work best, because I enjoy working with my classmates. For me, the most difficult part is speaking. We don’t often have the chance to speak English, so I find it really useful to take an active part in class discussion. What’s more, I’m still very weak at listening. I think I must listen to more English stories and tapes. And I believe I can learn English well by doing so in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将所提示内容的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般过去时态，第一人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

写作亮点：本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：With the help of在……帮助下；enjoy working with my classmates喜欢与我的同学们合作；have the chance to speak English有说英语的机会；所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。