Question

20．假设你是Jim，请你给旅行社的老板（Mr．Smith）写一封信．信中必须包括以下内容：
1．希望能够去中国南部进行十天的旅行．
2．想要住在海边，并且有一套足够大，能够容纳5个人居住的公寓，最好能带有厨房，能够自己做饭来节约钱．
3．希望能提供一些活动，比如游泳，沙滩排球等．
4．最好能够坐火车去．
要求：1．必须包含以上所有内容．2．可以适当发挥，不得少于80 词．
Dear Mr．Smith，
My family and I want to take a trip somewhere in southern China．I think you can provide me with some information．Here are my ideas：
I want to live near the sea．And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．Of course it would be nice if we get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking our own meals．
As for the activities，can you provide some sports such as swimming and beach volleyball．We can swim in the blue water and play volleyball after dinner．How relaxing!
Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy．

Yours，
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．我们想有一套足够大，能够容纳5个人居住的公寓，句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式短语；which is big enough for five people作定语修饰 apartment，构成一个定语从句．
②Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy．最后，如果我能乘火车到达那里，我会很高兴．句子中if引导一个条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时，by train表示乘火车．

解答 Dear Mr Smith，
My family and I want to take a trip somewhere in southern China．I think you can provide me with some information．Here are my ideas：（引出话题）
 I want to live near the sea．And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．（高分句型）Of course it would be nice if we get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking our own meals．（住的环境）
 As for the activities，can you provide some sports such as swimming and beach volleyball．We can swim in the blue water and play volleyball after dinner．How relaxing!（希望做的活动）
 Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy（高分句型）．（希望出行的方式）
 Thank you very much!I hope you can reply to me as soon as possible!（祝愿）
                                                 Yours，
                                                    Jim

点评 这是一篇给出材料提纲作文，题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥．