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2．经过努力，你终于在中考时金榜题名．在高中第一次放月假时，你带着一颗感恩的心回访母校，给你的学弟学妹作报告，你想对他们说些什么呢？师恩难忘、同学情谊、还有太多太多让你无法忘记的人和事…（词数：80～100）
要点可包括如下：
回顾：美丽的校园、慈祥的老师、生动有趣的课堂、丰富多彩的校园活动，
得到的关爱、取得的进步；
感谢：老师的教导，父母的支持，同学的帮助；
祝愿：但愿…
注意：
必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、句意连贯，可适当发挥，80词左右，发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总字数．
Good afternoon，everyone!I'm very glad to have the chance to make a speech here，
It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009．
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．We have learned a lot over these yeas，but we could hardly succeed without our teacher's efforts，our parents'support and our classmate's help．At this moment，I would like to thank all of you．
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us have a wonderful future!
Goodbye，our beautiful school，our dear teachers and our friends．
Thank you for listening．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009．我很荣幸代表2009届毕业生演讲．这是it is+形容词或名词+for sb．to do  sth．句型，对于…来说…是…的．
高分句型二
 I wish our school will be more beautiful and all of us will have a wonderful future!希望我们的学校更美丽，我们所有人都有一个美好的未来！这是一个宾语从句，I wish是主句，后面的是宾语从句，注意时态应该用一般将来时．

解答 Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，my dear teachers and fellow graduates，
It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词或名词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．We have learned a lot over these yeas，but we could hardly succeed without our teachers'efforts，our parents'support and our classmates'help【要点一，回顾】At this moment，I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us．【要点二，感谢】I wish our school more beautiful and all of us have a wonderful future!【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】【要点三，祝愿】
Goodbye，our beautiful school，our dear teachers and our friends．Thank you for listening．

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．