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10．节约资源，保护环境，人人有责．最近几年，低碳生活（Low-carbon Life）已受到越来越多人的关注．我们中学生也应该从身边的小事做起，注重"低碳生活"．请你以"How to live a low-carbon life"为题，结合以下要点写一篇短文，告诉同学们如何才能做到"低碳生活"．
•go to school on foot or by bike
•not forget to turn off the lights
•remember to turn off the tap（水龙头）
•use both sides of paper
•not use plastic bags
•…
•…
注意：1．内容必须包括以上要点，同时要有自己的观点（至少两个）；
2．文章中不能出现真实的校名和姓名．词数80个左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数．

How to live a low-carbon life
It's our duty to protect the environment．Low-carbon life is a good way to improve the environment．As students，what should we do to live a low-carbon life？Here I have some advice for you．
First，weshould go to school on foot or by bike instead of riding in cars．Second，don't forgrt to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．If we don't use water，remember to turn off the tap．Third，we are supposed to use both sides of paper．We‘d better not use plastic bags when we do shopping．We can use cloth bags instead．What's more，we should also reuse the water sometimes．For example，when we finish washing clothes，we can use the water to clean the floor．
It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Second，don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．当我们离开教室别忘了关灯．
when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
If we don't use water，remember to turn off the tap
if引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时．

解答 How to live a low-carbon life
It's our duty to protect the environment．Low-carbon life is a good way to improve the environment．As students，what should we do to live a low-carbon life？Here I have some advice for you．
First，we should go to school on foot or by bike instead of riding in cars．（走路或者骑车上学）Second，don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．【高分句型一】（关灯）If we don't use water，remember to turn off the tap【高分句型二】（关水龙头）．Third，we are supposed to use both sides of paper．（纸的两面都要用）We‘d better not use plastic bags when we do shopping．We can use cloth bags instead．（不用塑料袋）What's more，we should also reuse the water sometimes（再利用水）．For example，when we finish washing clothes，we can use the water to clean the floor．
It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment．

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点