Question

【题目】书面表达（本大题共10分）

假设你发现同学间有抄作业现象，请根据表格内容用英语写一篇题为“Stop copying others' homework．please”的短文刊登在英语学习辅导报上。

注意：1．短文须包括所有要点，要点语句通顺、意思连贯。

2．词数80左右，短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Stop copying others' homework， please

Every day some of my classmates like copying others' homework.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Stop copying others' homework， please

Every day some of my classmates like copying others' homework. Some students find there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult. Others spend too much time playing computer games and chatting on the Internet. As a result， they often fail the exams and some even lose interest in study.

I think it is helpful for us to make a list of the things we need to do. We should study hard instead of playing computer games. And we can also ask our teachers for advice if we meet problems.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，写出原因，结果，建议。我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求写作，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如宾语从句there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult。 it is helpful for us to make a list of the things。if we meet problems.定语从句we need to do.介词短语instead of playing computer games.句式：Somebody spend time doing. As a result.