Question

11．假设你是May，你的笔友Abby来信向你倾诉她的烦恼，请根据Abby的来信给出你的建议，写一封70词左右的回信．
Dear May，
How do you feel these days？I'm very sad because my mother always asks me to take the piano lessons after school．But I would like to spend my free time playing football with my team players．What should I do？Can you give me some advice？
Abby
（参考词汇：greeting问候  communicate交流   hobby爱好  understand理解 possible可能的）
Dear Abby，
Everything is all right with me．Thanks for your greeting．According to your email，I think the key problem is that you need to communicate with your mother．First，you can tell her what your hobby is．Then，you should understand her sometimes because what she said is good for you．And as for me，I would like to say that if possible，you can make a good plan to do both of them．You can spend half of the free time playing football with your team players and then the piano lessons．I believe if you do like this，your mother will be happy and you can get on well with her．
May．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think①the key problem is②that you need to communicate with your mother我认为主要问题是你需要和你的妈妈交流．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②that引导的表语从句，与is构成系表结构．
【高分句型二】
you should understand her sometimes①because②what she said is good for you．有时候你应该理解她因为她说的对你有好处．
①because引导的原因状语从句．
②what she said 是主语从句．

解答 Dear Abby，
    Everything is all right with me．Thanks for your greeting．According to your email，I think the key problem is that you need to communicate with your mother．【高分句型一】（分析问题）．First，you can tell her what your hobby is．Then，you should understand her sometimes because what she said is good for you．【高分句型二】And as for me，I would like to say that if possible，you can make a good plan to do both of them．You can spend half of the free time playing football with your team players and then the piano lessons（建议）．I believe if you do like this，your mother will be happy and you can get on well with her．
  May

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