Question

【题目】你校正在开展主题为“What should a good student be like?”的讨论，校园小记者采访了一些老师和家长。请根据采访内容，结合自己的观点，用英语写一篇短文与大家分享。

要求：

1、用上表格中所有要点，可适当发挥，100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2、不得引用或抄袭试卷前面阅读材料中的语句，否则不予赋分；

3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分；

4、请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则不予赋分。

What should a good student be like?

Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for teachers, they think_______________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for teachers, they think that on the one hand, we should love our country and follow the school rules. On the other hand, we should get on well with others and treat others politely.

As for parents, we are supposed to be not only healthy and happy but also kind and confident.

As far as I am concerned, to be a good students, we should protect the environment because we only have one earth.

Even if there are many different ideas about what should a good student be like, we need to do what we should do.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，主要讲述不同的人认为一个好学生应该是什么样子的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如on the one hand...on the other hand、follow the school rules、get on well with、as for、be supposed to、not only...but also...、as far as I'm concerned等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。