Question

上个星期天晚上，你和家人一起去看京剧。谈谈去之前你的心情及看过之后的体会。词数60个左右。

提示词语：look forward to ... , national opera, express Chinese culture, famous stories, facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting, have a nice evening ...

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Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera ...

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Answer 1

Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial painting, wonderful gesture and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people there. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.

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试题分析：这是篇命题作文，题目中已经明确了作文的内容，审题时一定要注意文章所要用到的时态，要用一般过去时。尽量使用到给出的提示词语，注意词语和句型的准确使用，表达要通畅流利。句子之间可适当使用连词，使文章更紧凑。

【亮点分析】本文要点齐全，表达准确流利，句中有很多有用的表达方式和句型，例如：I was looking forward to seeing it,我很期待去看。Look forward to doing sth.期待做某事；On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well.在去看的前一天晚上，我太兴奋了都没有睡好。句型So…that…如此……以至于……。

考点：命题作文。