Question

10．请仔细阅读下面这篇短文，再根据短文后面的内容要点完成写作，将短文写在答题卡指定的位置上． 
This is my favorite school．It starts at 9 a．m．and finishes at 3 p．m．We have music and art lessons every day because they are very interesting to us．There are only 25 students in each class．We only have half an hour of homework on weekdays．
There is a park，a shopping mall，a tennis court and a swimming pool．We have a big library with lots of useful books．There are lots of clubs and after-school activities．Every month，we go on a school trip to a museum or a theater．
为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议．假如你是刘波，请根据下面表格提示，以"Suggestions for a Better School Life"为题，用英语向校长写一封80词左右的建议信．注意：①文中应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；②语句连贯，不得照搬原文；③不能出现真实的校名和姓名；④开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Our school	*open the library more often*organize more after-class activities *give us more time for sports*organize fewer tests
Our teacher	*make classes more interesting*talk less but more clearly in class *finish classes on time*give us less homework

Suggestions for a Better School Life
Dear Headmaster，
I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will_________________________
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                            Liu Bo．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．
句中"they can talk less but more clearly in class"为"if"引导的条件状语从句，句中短语有"be interested in sth 对…感兴趣"．这句话意为：如果他们可以在课堂上说得更简单明了，我们会对学习更感兴趣而且有更多的时间练习．
高分句型二：
What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
句中"they will give us less homework and finish classes on time"为宾语从句．句中有短语"what's more  再者，而且"、"on time 准时"．这句话意为：再者，我希望他们少留点儿作业，按时下课．

解答 Dear headmaster，
  I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．（开篇点题）
  First，I hope our school will open the library more often．Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（对学校的建议）
  As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型一】What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型二】（对老师的建议）
  Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                             liu Bo

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．