Question

2013年，湖南卫视明星亲子真人秀节目《爸爸去哪儿》连续十期收视夺魁，并问鼎年度上星频道中收视最高的季播节目。你班同学也非常喜欢看，并关于“什么样的爸爸才是好爸爸”展开了讨论，请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语简要的介绍并表明你自己的观点。

注：词数80-100左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入字数。

??? 大家的观点	特点
??? 大部分学生	和孩子做朋友，和孩子一起玩，让孩子开心
一些学生	孩子犯错时严肃批评（criticize），帮助孩子进步
少数学生	细心照顾孩子，孩子可以依靠爸爸
你	……

The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father._____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father。Most of us think a good father should make friends with their children,paly with their them and make them happy.Some of us think the father should be a serious one.When they make mistakes, he criticize them seriously, help them with their progress. Few of us think the father should look after then carefully. The children can depend on their fathers. I think a good father should be a good teaher first, and then a good friend, because we learn from them and live with them.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:make friends with和……叫朋友；play with和……一起玩耍；help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；look after照看，照顾；depend on依靠，依赖；learn from向……学习等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

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