Question

人类只有一个地球，这是我们赖以生存的地方，所有保护地球是我们义不容辞的责任，那么我们应该怎样从身边的小事做起，来保护我们的环境，拯救地球呢？

（1）提示短语： keep …… clean/tidy  throw away rubbish  spit（吐痰） turn off the lights

（2）80词左右（共15分）

What  shall we do to protect the world

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

What shall we do to protect the world

   The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Then what should we do to protect our environment?

   Firstly, we are supposed to keep our environment clean. In our daily life, we cannot throw away the life rubbish. Never should we spit everywhere because it will pollute the environment and does harm to our health.

   Secondly, we’d better save energy. Don’t forget to turn off the lights before we leave the room. If possible, we can walk or ride a bike to school and advertise our parents to use motorcars less.

   Last but not least, we can try our best to educate more people to protect our earth. We can live a low-carbon life. Let’s act together to take care of our world. Only in this way can we make our life better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文。本文所给材料较笼统，我们要用准确、地道的语言把这些内容表达出来。在动笔之前，要结合现代社会中的现实情况，提出恰当合理的建议。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，要体现出向世人呼吁保护环境的重要性，要大家一起努力。写作中要求恰当使用连词、过渡词和衔接句型，注意上下文联系紧密，有条理性，叙述符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

     这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语以及高级句式，为文章增色不少.如:we have the duty to take care of it.我们有责任照顾好我们的家园we are supposed to keep our environment clean.我们应该保持环境的清洁倒装句式的使用显示了较高的语言功底，如Never should we spit everywhere我们永远不能随地吐痰Only in this way can we make our life better and better. 只有通过这些方式我们才能使我们的生活变得越来越好等表述准确，本文中连词的使用恰当，句子衔接紧密、连贯，如 Firstly, Secondly,  Last but not least,语气婉转诚恳，很有说服力。

考点：提纲作文。