Question

随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网络购物”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也开始加入网购群体中。请你根据以下内容，写一篇关于网上购物的文章。

一，内容提示：

优点：1. 足不出户，节约时间，不会拥挤劳累

      2. 价格通常比较便宜

      3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多

缺点：1. 只看到图片，看不到商品本身

      2. 容易购买大量不需要的东西，造成浪费

二，要求：

1. 所表述内容必须包含提示中所有方面。

2. 词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

三，提示词汇：网购 shopping online;  商品 goods

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping on line.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成这篇关于网上购物的文章。写作中要包含网购的优缺点、方面进行陈述，表达出人们的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文详细、全面地阐明了自己对网络购物的看法，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语、状语从句中的省略，包含宾语从句和定语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少.如become a fashion in our daily life，On one hand,，On the other hand,，When shopping on line，buy what you’re interested in，whose prices are generally lower.第三段中谚语的恰当使用也是可圈可点的，如Every coin has two sides.学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。