Question

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今年四月份，市启动了“文明餐桌行动”，号召全体市民“文明用餐，节俭惜福”。请以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

waste too much   eat up all the food    eat junk food      eat a balanced diet

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Aiming at some bad eating habits among the citizens, our government has taken some actions to urge people to save food and eat healthily. What we can do is listed as follows.

Wasting too much is quite common nowadays. The food that people didn’t eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins, which is a serious waste. Instead, we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money. Besides, junk food is something popular among young people. In fact, it really does harm to our health. So it’s really necessary for us to eat a balanced diet. Only when we eat healthily, can we be energetic enough to study and work well.

All in all, keeping a good habit in eating is something necessary for us to do, which can save food and make us eat healthily. So, let’s do it from now!  

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作首先说明图片中所陈述的现象，说明浪费现象很严重，然后说明我们改如何做we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money.然后对青少年喜欢吃垃圾食品进行陈述，说明我们应该有平衡额饮食eat a balanced diet.最后进行总结，号召大家一起现在就行动起来let’s do it from now!

考点：提纲类写作

点评：初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式如have a  far-reaching effect on sth对…有深远的影响，only 置于句首的倒装及only when …,can we…等。对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。