Question

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：

●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；

●我的压力是什么；

●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

      2. 词数80~100词；

      3. 短文的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

      4. 将答案写在相应的位置上。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. __________________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                            Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。同时针对个人的真实情况与短文的要求进行恰当的事合，更能加强作品的可读性。

【亮点说明】本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。

考点：提纲作文。