Question

【题目】假如你是Mike，你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。写一信说明一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。

要求：（1）内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；

（2）书写认真，句子通顺；

（3）词数：60-80词。

Dear Jack,

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Yours

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】I have a good friend ,his name is Jack ,he doesn't study hard but he spends long hours playing computer games ,and now his head hurts ,he can't see clearly ,and he has a sore back ,what's more he doesn't sleep well so I decided to give him some advice ,1. he shouldn't spend such a long time sitting before the computer in the same way for too long without moving 2.he should take more exercise and eat a healthy diet 3.he should go out to do some outdoor activities with friends ,if he does so ,I think he will get better soon .

【解析】试题分析：首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。检查时必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。