Question

写作：.某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇90字左右的短文。

过去 1.生活贫困，房屋破旧。

2.污染严重，垃圾满地。

3.交通不便，游客很少。  

现在1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车。

2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝......

3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。

将来  请你展望家乡的未来

注意：

1.文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分。

2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3.小词典：环境environment; 污染pollution;方便convenient.

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life.

Their houses are larger and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.

I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.  

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作条理非常清晰，首先对家乡过去的情况进行描写1.生活贫困，房屋破旧People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.2.污染严重，垃圾满地Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.3.交通不便，游客很少The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.三点表达的恰到好处；然后对现在的情况进行描写，按照题目中所给的提示进行书写，写的过程注意多使用被动形式如Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.能够很好的看出写作者的语言功底；最后展望家乡会变得越来越好I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中考的作文，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。