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你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查，调查结果如下图。

请你以“What a good friend should be like”为题，用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法。

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注意：1．词数：80－100(开头已给出的内容不计入总词数)；

2．内容必须包括上图中的要点，可适当发挥；

3．文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺；

4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

What a good friend should be like

Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．

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Answer 1

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　　参考范文一：

What a good friend should be like

　　Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．About seven percent/only a few/Less than ten percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．About forty－eight percent/Less than half/Nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．Sixty－seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing, and also they should be good at sports．Ninety-five percent/Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest．Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．

　　参考范文二：

　　Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．Nearly all(95％)of the students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest．He or she should trust you and be willing to share joys with you．Sixty-seven percent of the students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing．Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports．Forty-eight percent of the students agree that a good friend must be hard－working and do well in lessons．Of course, there are some(7％/less than 10％)caring about appearance．They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces and slim figures as their good friends．

　　I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome．I think honesty is the most important．…

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　　1．本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。

　　2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。

　　3、词数少于规定词数20词以上者，扣1分。

　　4、未写自己观点的，扣2分。

　　5、评分时应注意：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的准备性及上下文的连贯性、单词拼写的准确性。

　　各档次的给分范围和要求：

　　第五档：(15－13分)

　　完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许有个别语言错误。

　　第四档：(12－10分)

　　符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

　　第三档：(9－7分)

　　表达不够清楚，内容不够完整，但尚能达意。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。

　　第二档：(6－4分)

　　与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出基本要点。只是简单拼凑，所写内容难以理解。

　　第一档：(3－0分)

　　白卷或文不对题或不知所云。只能写出与内容有关的一些单词。