Question

中国自古是礼仪之邦，乐于助人是我们的传统美德。工作、学习和生活中的互帮互助能使我们感觉到温暖，使我们彼此都能更轻松地面对人生的各种难题。请以“帮助他人”为主题写一篇短文，内容包括：
1. 简单表达你对这件事的看法。
2. 讲述一个你帮助别人或受到帮助的经历。
3. 帮助人或被帮助后的感受是什么？
4.呼吁大家传承乐于助人的传统美德。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。
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Answer 1

Be Ready to Help Others
One can't do all the jobs and complete all the things by himself,and a cooperation and a help are needed. Looking back, we can knowthe history of human beings is a history of helping each other. Firstly,helping others is essential,as one's ability is limited and can't finish everything.We needs a help in order to do the thing well.Secondly,to help others means to help ourselves.We can't live in a single world.When we help others in trouble someday, they will do us a favor in return.On the contrary, if we don't offer a help,we won't get a help,Finally,helping others is not only a good quality,but also a happy thing.We can get much happiness by helping others.Friends,don't grudge your love or help,for helping others is just helping yourselves

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的话题作文。主要用一般现在时态和过去时态。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如Looking bac,Firstly,Secondly,Finally,not onlybut also,等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。