Question

2．假设你是Li Lei，就如何做一名合格的中学生写一篇60-80字的发言稿，要点如下：
1）要早睡早起，保持身体健康，上课不要迟到．
2）应该和同学及老师相处融洽．
3）在家应该帮助父母做家务，在校应该努力学习．
4）要爱护环境，并且设法做些有用的事来保护环境．
5）写一两点你自己的看法．
参考词汇：环境environment   设法 try      保护protect
Fellow students
I am Li Lei．Today I want to share my idea on how to be a qualified middle school student with everyone here．Hello，l'm Li lei，l'm a Middle school student，and l want to be a qualified student．So let me tell you what should l do to be it．
First，I should goto bed early and get up early，it is necessary to keep healthy．I should not be late for classs．
Second，I should get along well with classmates and teachers．
Third，I should help parents do housework at home and work hard at school
Fourth，Take care of the environment and try to do something useful to protect the environment．
In short（总之），if I follow these，I will be a qualified student．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一，
it is necessary to  keep healthy保持健康是必要的．这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于…来说…是…的．  
高分句型二，
if I can do these things，I will be a qualified student如果我做到这些，我将是一个合格的学生．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是含有将来时的句子，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 Hello，l'm Li lei，l'm a Middle school student，and l want to be a qualified student．So let me tell you what should l do to be it．
First，I should  go to bed early and get up early，it is necessary to  keep healthy【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】，I should not  be late for classs．【要点一，要早睡早起，保持身体健康，上课不要迟到】
Second，I should  get along well with classmates and teachers．【要点二，应该和同学及老师相处融洽】
Third，I should   help parents do housework at home and work hard at school．【要点三，在家应该帮助父母做家务，在校应该努力学习】
Fourth，Take care of the environment and try to do something useful to protect the environment．【要点四，要爱护环境，并且设法做些有用的事来保护环境】
In short（总之），if I can do these things，I will be a qualified student【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】!【要点五，自己的看法】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑
关系，注意不要遗漏要点．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．