Question

Ms James是你校的一位外籍教师，五年前从美国来到你校教英语，她下周三将要回国。回国前夕，学校将为她举行欢送晚会。请你用下面所给的提示词，以及要点，写一篇英文欢送辞。词数90左右，欢送辞的开头和结尾已给出。

提示词：friendly, strict, help, thankful, journey

要点：1.她友好、又易相处，但对我们要求严格。

2.几年来一直工作努力，尽最大努力使课生动有趣，学生们对她的课感兴趣

3. Ms James精力充沛，幽默又乐于助人，她在英语学习上帮我们很多，我们已取得巨大进步，我们都很感谢她。

4.她下周三将要离开回美国，我们祝她路途愉快。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Good evening, everyone!

     I’m very glad to show our thanks to Ms James. Good evening, everyone! I’m very glad to show our thanks to Ms James. Ms James came to teach us from the US five years ago. She is friendly and easy to get along with, but she’s strict with us. All these years she has worked hard. She has tried her best to make her class lively and interesting. We’re very interested in her English class. Ms James is energetic, humorous and helpful. She’s helped us a lot in our English study. With her help, we have made great progress. We all feel thankful to her.

    Next Wednesday Ms James will leave for America. Let’s wish her a nice journey. That’s all!

That’s all! Thank you.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: show our thanks to表达对（某人）的感谢, easy to get along with易于相处，be strict with 对（某人）要求严格，try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事，be interested in对某事感兴趣，wish her a nice journey祝她旅途愉快等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。