Question

7．假设你是李华，对目前中国出现的雾霾（the smog）天气非常担忧，向China Daily（中国日报）的编辑写了一封英语信件，希望引起人们的重视，内容如下：

天气状况	雾霾天气影响中国的许多地方
雾霾的原因	全国的工厂排放出许多废气；近年来城市的汽车越来越多等．空气污染严重
雾霾的危害	危害人们身体健康，引发多种疾病甚至癌症；引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故
希  望	人们外出最好少开小车，多坐公交车、骑自行车或步行；尽量不燃放烟火，尤其春节时；选择空气环保产品；多种树木…

参考词汇：
废气：waste gas
空气污染：air pollution
引起：cause
多种疾病：many kinds of illnesses
癌症：cancers
交通堵塞：traffic jam
燃放烟火：set off fireworks
空气环保产品：air-friendly products
要求：
1．词数：70词左右．
2．信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3．文中不得出现真实的人名与校名．
Dear editor，
I'm Li Hua．I'm a middle school student．I'm worried about the smog weather in my country．Can your newspaper ask people to pay much attention to it？
The smog weather has influenced many places of China．Why is it so serious？Because factories all over our country produce so much waste gas into the air，and there are more and more cars in the city in recent years，and so on．So the air pollution is becoming serious in China now．
The smog is a danger to people's life．It's harmful to our health．It can cause many kinds of illnesses，even cancers．It can also cause traffic jam，and sometimes even traffic accidents．
So I think everyone should protect the environment．When we go out，we'd better drive cars less，and try to go by bus，by bike or on foot instead．We should try not to set fireworks，especially during the Spring Festivals．It's good for people to choose air-friendly products．And we should plant more trees to make the world greener，so the air will be fresh
Thanks a lot!
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈雾霾的原因和危害．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1天气状况：雾霾天气影响中国的许多地方
2雾霾的原因：全国的工厂排放出许多废气；近年来城市的汽车越来越多等．空气污染严重
3雾霾的危害：危害人们身体健康，引发多种疾病甚至癌症；引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故
4希  望：人们外出最好少开小车，多坐公交车、骑自行车或步行；尽量不燃放烟火，尤其春节时；选择空气环保产品；多种树木
常用到的重点短语：
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
be harmful to 对…不利
had better do sth  最好做某事
try to do sth 尽力做某事
make…adj  让…怎么样

【高分句型】
1．①When we go out，②we'd better drive cars less，and ③try to go by bus，by bike or on foot④instead．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②had better do sth  最好做某事
③try to do sth 尽力做某事
④instead 代替，放句末
2．It's good for people to choose air-friendly products．
be good for  对…有益
3．And we should plant more trees ①to make the world greener，②so the air will be fresh．
①动词不定式做目的状语．make…adj  让…怎么样
②so 表示所以．连词，表示因果关系，引出下文．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm Li Hua．I'm a middle school student．I'm worried about the smog weather in my country．Can your newspaper ask people to pay much attention to it？
The smog weather has influenced many places of China．（雾霾天气影响中国的许多地方）Why is it so serious？Because factories all over our country produce so much waste gas into the air，（全国的工厂排放出许多废气）and there are more and more cars in the city in recent years，and so on．So the air pollution is becoming serious in China now．（近年来城市的汽车越来越多等．空气污染严重）
The smog is a danger to people's life．It's harmful to our health．It can cause many kinds of illnesses，even cancers．（危害人们身体健康，引发多种疾病甚至癌症）It can also cause traffic jam，and sometimes even traffic accidents．（引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故）
So I think everyone should protect the environment．When we go out，we'd better drive cars less，and try to go by bus，by bike or on foot instead．【高分句型】（人们外出最好少开小车，多坐公交车、骑自行车或步行）We should try not to set fireworks，especially during the Spring Festivals．It's good for people to choose air-friendly products．【高分句型】And we should plant more trees to make the world greener，so the air will be fresh．【高分句型】（尽量不燃放烟火，尤其春节时；选择空气环保产品；多种树木）
Thanks a lot!
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

点评 这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全．句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致．文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性．