Question

【题目】中学生普遍面临着很多烦恼，请用英语描述下面表格中列出的问题，并提出自己的建议。

烦恼1整天有做不完的作业，经常熬夜学习，无暇顾及个人爱好；

烦恼2父母太忙，没有时间陪自己；

烦恼3几乎没有亲密的朋友可以交流，经常感到孤独；

烦恼4对自己的体重不满意，不知如何改变；

建议 … …

要求：1、条理清楚，语句通顺；

2、80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

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Answer 1

【答案】Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

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