Question

【题目】和谐是一种美德。和谐社会由一个个和谐的家庭构成。构建和谐家庭是我们每个人的责任。和谐的家庭给予我们精神支持，并使我们倍感幸福。

假如你是李华，你家被社区评为“和谐家庭”。请你用英语写一篇短文，给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你的家庭是什么样子，为使家庭和谐你经常做些什么，以及你的感受。

提示词语：harmony(和谐), get on well with, support, happy

提示问题：●What’s your harmonious family like?

●What do you usually do?

●How do you feel?

Everyone wants to live in a harmonious family.

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Answer 1

【答案】Everyone wants to live in harmonious family. I live in a harmonious family full of laughter. Each of the family members gets on well with each other. We often sit together to share our problems and happiness and everyone feels supported and relaxed at home.

As for me, I respect and love my parents. When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. When I’m at home, I often help them with some housework, so they can have more time to do what they love. When my sister is in trouble, I usually try my best to help her.

I love my harmonious family and feel comfortable at home. I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给某英文网站投稿，介绍一下自己的家庭是什么样的，是不是和谐家庭，为使家庭和谐你经常怎样做以及自己的感受。题目中只给出了这些写作的提纲，而具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。写作时，应注意划分文章结构，分段叙述，这样可以使文章有层次、有条理，叙述清晰。要将题目要求的所有信息包括进去，不要遗漏要点。还应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语逐词翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的单词和句型。并且应注意语句直接的连接或过度成分，使文章成为一个整体，表达流畅，意思连贯。