Question

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

74. 生活中我们每天都在与人交往，也许你曾经遇到过这样的困境：你想在聚会上穿的衣服

脏了让妈妈帮你洗，然而妈妈因为工作太忙没有时间洗；与同学共同完成墙报(a wall

newspaper)时，你有一个自认为很好的想法没有被采纳；你最近学习很忙，但是向你请教问

题的同学很执着；…… 你是怎样做的？

现在，请你就与人交往(communicating with others)的话题向《21世纪英语报》投稿。 描

述一次你解决与他人交往困境的经历，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：experience; get on well; help; talk; by oneself; understand; respect; share; enjoy

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each other. However, it’s not an easy thing.

Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall

newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.

From the experience, I know how important it is to have a

heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作首先引出写作的主题，说明在交流过程中也会遇到一些困难的事情，并非易事However, it’s not an easy thing.然后再说明自己一次的经历并说明自己刚开始如何处理的，后由于自己的努力最终问题解决了，从这个角度来说明沟通的重要性，最后，从这次经历中总结自己的观点，说明当发生矛盾时要多进行心对心的交流，才能有更好的关系especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文的写作要抓住要点，对该所选的的相关内容都要描写到。初三的作文着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。