Question

每个人都有理想和追求，都有自己的梦想。你的梦想有多高，你就可能飞多高。世界上第一位没有双手的飞行员Jessica Cox通过自己的不懈努力创造了一个个奇迹。请根据图片提示，描述她的奋斗史，并就此简单谈谈你的感想。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
3. 词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

As the saying goes, will will find a way. Jessica Cox is such a living example to prove it. She is a girl who touches the sky without arms.                                       
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                 

Answer 1

As the saying goes, will will find a way. Jessica Cox is such a living example to prove it. She is a girl who touches the sky without arms.
When she was born, her parents were surprised to find that she had no arms. In order to live like others, she works hard. For example, she began to learn dance at a very early age, and she took driving lessons. Now she knows how to use computers . Because of her hard work, she became the world’s first armless pilot. How amazing!
Thinking about her story, I think I should work much harder so that I can make my dream come true early.

解析试题分析：本文的写作首先对她出生时的情况进行描写，说明她没有手臂she had no arms.她开始在很小的时候就学习跳舞she began to learn dance at a very early age参加驾校的课程she took driving lessons.并对现在的情况进行描写，她能够使用电脑，成为了世界第一个无臂飞行员。最后表达自己的感想，如表达听到她的故事，我会更加努力的学习以至于能够实现我自己的梦想I think I should work much harder so that I can make my dream come true early.
考点：提纲类写作
点评：在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生要注意详略得当，做到有条理。学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型。如be good for,benefit,useful等单词短语。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采。