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6．在提倡和谐的社会 里，我们怎么样才能成为一名"讲文明，礼貌，守纪律"的中学生？请根据下面的提示，以"How to Be a Cool Student？"为题写一篇词数80词左右的短文．
提示：1．家庭表现：爱父母，帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务等．
2．学校表现：遵守校规，与同学友好相处．
3．公共场合表现：勿大声喧哗，坐公车时应主动让位给老人等．
要求：文章必须包括所给提示中1-3项的内容，可展开思路，自由地适当发挥．文章中不能出现真实姓名，校名和其他真实信息．
How to Be a Good Student？
As a student．it′s necessary and important to behave well．
When we come back home from school，we should try our best to help our parents．When we are at school，we should get on well with our schoolmates and teachers．We should also help each other．We should follow the school rules，too．In public，we should be ready to help others who are in trouble．We′d better not talk or laugh loudly．When we are on a bus，we should offer our seats to the old and the women with babies．
In a word，wherever we are，we should behave well to be good students．If we do，our society will be better and better．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"How to Be a Cool Student？"为题谈谈我们怎么样才能成为一名"讲文明，礼貌，守纪律"的中学生．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．家庭表现：爱父母，帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务等．
2．学校表现：遵守校规，与同学友好相处．
3．公共场合表现：勿大声喧哗，坐公车时应主动让位给老人等．
常用到的重点短语：
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
get on with sb 与某人相处
be ready to do sth 乐于做某事
had better do sth 最好做某事
in a word 总之
比较级+and+比较级  越来越…
【高分句型】
1．①When we come back home from school，we should ②try our best to help our parents．
①when所引导的时间状语从句
②try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
2．In public，we should ①be ready to help others ②who are in trouble．
①be ready to do sth 乐于做某事
②who作为关系词的定语从句，who作为主语，修饰先行词others．in trouble 处于困境
3．①If we do，our society will be ②better and better．
①if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
②比较级+and+比较级  越来越…

解答 How to Be a Good Student？
As a student．it′s necessary and important to behave well．
When we come back home from school，we should try our best to help our parents．【高分句型】
（家庭表现） When we are at school，we should get on well with our schoolmates and teachers．We should also help each other．We should follow the school rules，too．（学校表现）In public，we should be ready to help others who are in trouble．【高分句型】We′d better not talk or laugh loudly．When we are on a bus，we should offer our seats to the old and the women with babies．（公共场合表现）
In a word，wherever we are，we should behave well to be good students．If we do，our society will be better and better．【高分句型】（总结）

点评 本题要求以"How to Be a Cool Student？"为题，就怎样成为一名"讲文明，礼貌，守纪律"的中学生写一篇短文．短文可以从"在家庭的表现"、"在学校的表现"、"在公共场合的表现"几个方面展开讲述．短文用一般现在时态，可以用when引出的时间状语从句，if引出的条件状语从句等等来设置不同的情境来谈论人们的行为规范．要注意语言的选择及句型的运用．要做到主题鲜明，思想积极向上．短文开门见山，直奔主题：行为规范、举止文明很必需而且重要．第二段具体讲述如何成为一名"讲文明，礼貌，守纪律"的中学生．本段用"When we…，we should…"排比句型，从"在家庭的表现"、"在学校的表现"、"在公共场合的表现"几个方面展开讲述．条理文明，生动具体．其中的try one's best，get on well with，be ready to do，had better等等结构为本文增色不少．第三段再次强调中心：无论在哪儿，我们都应该举止文明做好学生．并进一步升华主题：如果我们举止文明，我们的社会就会越来越好．