Question

16．电子产品的使用越来越低龄化，连几个月的宝宝也痴迷不能自已．上网学习和做作业的情况也越来越多．请结合你的所见所闻和自己的经历，写一篇英文作文．
内容包括：1你见到的使用电子产品的情况（如手机、电脑等）；
2你自己使用电子产品的情况；
3你对电子产品的看法．
要    求：1表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
380词左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】、
Electronic products are becoming more and more popular today电子产品变得越来越流行．
比较级+and+比较级：越来越…
【高分句型二】
When I am tired，I prefer to listen to some songs on the computer to relax myself当我累了，我更喜欢在电脑上听一些歌曲放松自己，
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 Electronic products are becoming more and more popular today．【高分句型一】Some babies are even interested in them．
Almost all students in our class have mobile phones．They call their parents，listen to music and chat with their friends．（见到的使用电子产品的情况）For students，we are asked to study and finish our homework online．As for me，I like to search the Internet for more information if I have some difficulty with study．When I am tired，I prefer to listen to some songs on the computer to relax myself【高分句型二】．（自己使用电子产品的情况）
Every coin has two sides，and electronic products also have advantages and disadvantages．If necessary，we can ask our parents or teachers for help in order to use them in a correct way．（对电子产品的看法）

点评 题目中给出的材料较为齐全．动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺．为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词