Question

【题目】假设你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告。

Name	Tommy (一个十五岁的初三学生)
Characteristics	聪明、幽默、乐于助人
Hobbies	不仅喜欢看恐怖片而且喜欢看关于体育新闻的电视节目。酷爱绘画，每次画画时都徜徉在色彩的世界里。
Study	自从本学期他把绝大部分精力投放到学习中，他取得了很大进步。
Dreams	希望能认识来自世界各地的音乐家，参加游戏类节目，赢得大奖。
Problems	面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠。
Your suggestions	?? (根据实际情况提一两点建议)…

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要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；

2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等；

3、词数：100词左右。

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight._____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is a Junior three student and he is 15 years old. He is a clever, humour,diligent and generous boy. He is always ready to help others. He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. Especially he is crazy about drawing.He has put his effort into study since this term and makes great progress. He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. He wishes to know the musicians from all over the world.He won the prize for games.Recently, he is going to attend an exam. So he is under great pressure and can’t sleep well. So I think he should relax himself by listening to some light music. I think that will have some help.?

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，对Tommy进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Tommy is……，He not only likes……，but also likes……，He won……，So I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。