Question

10．2014年8月15日，一年一度的南国书香节暨羊城书展开幕．假设你是李华，请你根据下面的内容要求向你的朋友Becky介绍你参加书展的情况，写一篇英语短文．
内容要求：
1．会场很大，书的种类很多．我最喜欢的书是…
2．看见了林志颖、钟南山等名人．
3．买了许多学习用品，和卡通人物照了相，参加了本土文化活动等等．
4．你参观后的感想．
写作要求：
1．词数70左右；
2．不得透漏学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．
词汇提示：会场 hall       本土文化 local culture activities

Dear Becky，
Do you know Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair？It was held on August 15^th．I took part in it and let me tell you something about it．When I got there，I found the hall very large and there were many different kinds of books there．And I like the story books best．The most exciting thing is that I saw many famous people there，including Lin Zhiying，and Zhong Nanshan．I bought a lot of school things．I also took photos with cartoon characters and joined in some local culture activities．In my opinion，we should hold Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair every year．It is well worth doing．Reading is very important．Reading makes a full man!
Yours，
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
When I got there，I found the hall very large and there were many different kinds of books there．当我到达那里时，我发现大厅很大，有许多不同种类的书籍．
when引导的时间状语从句．
different kinds of 不同种类的
句型二：
The most exciting thing is that I saw many famous people there，including Lin Zhiying，and Zhong Nanshan．最令人兴奋的是，我看到很多名人，包括林志颖，和钟南山．
 that 引导的表语从句．
The most exciting thing最令人兴奋的事情，形容词最高级．

解答 Dear Becky，
Do you know Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair？It was held on August 15^th．I took part in it and let me tell you something about it．When I got there，I found the hall very large and there were many different kinds of books there．【高分句型一】And I like the story books best．The most exciting thing is that I saw many famous people there，including Lin Zhiying，and Zhong Nanshan．【高分句型二】I bought a lot of school things．I also took photos with cartoon characters and joined in some local culture activities．In my opinion，we should hold Nanguo Shuxiang Festival and book fair every year．It is well worth doing．Reading is very important．Reading makes a full man!
Yours，Li hua

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．