Question

很多人认为当今的中学生有自己鲜明的特点。他们多才多艺，擅长琴棋书画；同时也常常以自我为中心，很少为他人着想。作为中学生，你认为自己最大的优点是什么？（请举例说明），缺点是什么？（请举例说明）。你应该如何扬长避短，做最好的自己？
要求：1．词数80左右。 文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2．短文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校。
3．注意不要遗漏要点。
It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points.
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Answer 1

It is said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points. They are good at many things, for example, music, drawing, sports. But they are also thought to be selfish. They often think about themselves.
I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others. I remember once I played basketball with my friends. Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.
Of course I have many disadvantages. I don’t work hard at my studies and always play computer games. So I am not good at my subjects. My teacher said to me I was clever, but I didn’t put my heart into it. I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them. I think I can overcome my shortcomings. I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们对现在自己的特点写一篇议论文。现在的中学生多才多艺，但同时也有很多缺点，如以自我为中心，不为他人着想等。对于你自己来说，你身上也会有优点和缺点，你的优点是什么，你的缺点又是什么，用例子来说明。另外，怎样根据你的优点和缺点，扬长避短，做最好的自己。这个题目只是给了我们这篇短文的主要内容，我们还需自己将它补充完整，使内容丰富。我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容翻译出来，同时还需注意表达得完整和流畅，注意使用正确的时态。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作文中作者首先点明了现在中学生的特点，他们有很多优点，但是也有很多缺点。接下来，作者写了自己的优点，并举了一个实例来说明自己的这个优点；下一段中作者写了自己的缺点，也举例说明。最后作者决定发扬优点，改正缺点，做更好的中学生。整篇短文的结构完整，内容也很充实。短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短语，如But they are also thought to be selfish、I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others、I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them.等。