Question

今年4月14日青海省玉树县发生了7.1级的地震，请你写一封慰问信给玉树县的中学生，谈谈你能为他们做些什么，并鼓励他们坚强、相信新校园、新家园会有的。
要求：90词左右，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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Answer 1

Dear friends，
I’m sorry to hear that there was a strong earthquake in Yushu, Qinghai province(your hometown).I watch TV every day and care about the news from Yushu. We are so sad that most of us cried .We decided to raise money for charity to help homeless people. Everyone in our class takes out all our pocket money. Secondly, we should buy books for students in Yushu. Thirdly, we want to be volunteers to help them out. We feel good about doing something for you.
As a middle school student, we must be brave and study hard. We should learn from the PLA men . I’m sure ,with the help of all Chinese , You’ll have new schools and new houses soon Let’s work hard together !
Yours sincerely,
Nancy

试题分析：这是一封写给玉树灾区的信，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，信的开头要表示悲痛的心情，谈谈能为他们做些什么，并鼓励他们坚强、相信新校园、新家园会有的。注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：I’m sorry to hear that，等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：Secondly, Thirdly,等。