Question

研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。

听前的情绪状态	适用音乐	听后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑	流行音乐	放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度	乡村音乐	平静
困倦、疲劳	摇滚音乐	振奋
孤独、悲伤	（自拟内容）	（自拟内容）

参考词汇：乡村音乐：country music摇滚音乐：rock music古典音乐：classical music

爵士乐：jazz music 民间： folk music 交响乐：symphonic music

Recently, a new research shows that different kinds of music can influence different moods. Now would you please talk about the function of music.

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Answer 1

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情，动笔之前应首先考虑运用那些句式表达短文提到的5种情况，一定要避免句式重复。全文主要用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 has an important effect on，listening to ，different kinds of，cheer me up，so that；运用不同的句式使文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。如宾语从句that music has an important effect on one’s moods；定语从句who enjoy playing computer games，which always cheers me up；条件状语从句If you have too much pressure, if you feel tired and sleepy；时间状语从句When I feel lonely and sad；目的状语从句so that you will feel excited again；结果状语从句so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. 整篇文章显示了作者具有较高的英语水平，达到了学以致用的程度,值得我们学习。