Question

18．中国梦，就是中华民族的复兴之梦，是十三亿中华儿女共同拥有的伟大梦想．为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的100名学生中进行了一词调查采访．采访主要围绕"What do you want to be when you grow up？"和"Why？"这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写一份以"The Dream Jobs"为题的报告，并谈谈你自己的理想．
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工作	比例	原因
商人	54%	变得有钱
医生	28%	拯救生命
教师	12%	让别人学到更多
其他	6%	…．．

In order to know students'ideals，we made a survey among 100 students in our school．Here are the results．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：They think the teachers make people learn morn knowledge．他们认为老师使人们学习更多的知识．（make sb．do sth．使某人做某事）
高分句型二：But they believe the work is good for people．但是他们认为这样的工作对人们有好处．（be good for…，对…有好处 ）

解答 In order to know students'ideas．We made a survey among 100 students in our school．Here are the results．Most of them want to be businessmen．（表格中的第一项职业长大后想成为一名商人）They think they will be rich．（想成为商人的原因 ）More of them want to be doctors．（表格中第二行提出多数人想成为一名医生）They can save sick people（想成为医生的原因）．Some want to be teachers．（表格中第三行想成为老师）They think the teachers make people learn morn knowledge（想成为老师的原因）．（高分句型一）Some want to be policemen（提出一些人想成为警察的梦想）．They think the work is exciting．But some don't want to be policeman．They think they are dangerous．But they believe the work is good for people．（高分句型二） It can help catch the thieves．（提出他们认为警察的工作对人们有利 ）Some want to be nurses，They can help doctors and sick people．（还有一些人想当护士的梦想以及原因 ）

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