Question

4．假如你叫李华，你打算中考结束后和同学们结伴出游，但遭到了父母的反对．请结合此事，谈谈如何对待父母及如何解决日常生活中与他们意见不一致的问题．
要求：（1）逻辑清晰，语言通顺，观点不限，自由发挥，无需标题．
（2）文中不能以任何方式出现真实的人名、校名和县（市）区名及其它相关信息．
（3）词数：80-100．
参考词汇：中考 the High School Entrance Examination．
In my opinion，we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much．Since we are not adults，we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions．But when we do so，we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think．What should we do？I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice．
Take my experience for example：Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said"No"．I was really upset at first．But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety．So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates．In the end，not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip．
How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much我们应该爱和尊重我们的父母，因为他们爱和照顾我们这么多．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…，
高分句型二
But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety但后来我意识到，他们只是担心我的安全．
这是一个宾语从句，I realized 是主句，后面的是宾语从句，注意时态应该一致．

解答 In my opinion，we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much
【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．Since we are not adults，we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions【开篇点明主题】．But when we do so，we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think．What should we do？I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice．
Take my experience for example：Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said"No"．I was really upset at first．But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety
【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates．In the end，not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip．【正文部分详细介绍如何对待父母及如何解决日常生活中与他们意见不一致的问题】
How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!【结尾紧扣主题】

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