Question

【题目】【2016山东青岛】书面表达。

初中生活即将结束，丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。根据图表提示，选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述。

内容包括：1．此次活动的过程；

2．你的收获或感受。

要求：1．词数：80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game. Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t concentrate on the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captains waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students ,we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air. I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是一篇提纲类话题作文。请你选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述。话题贴近学生生活，使学生易于发挥。作文可以分为两个方面：1．此次活动的过程；2．你的收获或感受。要做到层次分明，段落清楚。主要使用一般过在时态。注意：句子结构要准确，要点要齐全，内容要合理，篇章结构要连贯，还应满足词数要求。

写作亮点：该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。是一篇很好的习作。