Question

假如你是某杂志社编辑Mr. Knowledgeable,根据中学生 Bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题。字数80—100，开头已给出。
Dear Knowledgeable,
My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. My parents always say “no” to my ideas without any reason. So I often quarrel(吵架) with them. Also, my brother is not very nice to me. He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show. Instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. I don’t think this is fair. At home, I always feel lonely and nervous. Is that normal? What can I do?
Bob
Dear Bob,
                                                                              
                                                                              
Knowledgeable

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
It’s normal to have these feelings. Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family? First,it’s not right to quarrel with your parents. I don’t think quarrelling can solve problems. You’d better have a talk with your parents. Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying “no” to your ideas.  Second, Why not sit down and communicate with your brother? You should explain that you don’t mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favourite TV show. I hope things will be better soon.
Knowledgeable

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以某杂志社编辑的身份给Bob写一封回信。首先我们必须要读懂Bob的来信，知道Bob有什么问题。根据这封信的内容可知，Bob遇到的问题是他和他的家人相处得不好，他经常跟父母吵架，和哥哥的关系也不好。因此我们要根据这一内容，帮助Bob解决他的问题，给他一些建议。这些内容需要我们自己来想象，给出的建议要符合这个情景，能对Bob起到帮助的作用。例如，我们可以建议他坐下来和父母谈一谈，把你的想法跟父母说清楚，争取获得他们的理解和支持；和自己的哥哥也要进行很好的沟通，让他知道你的意见，互相理解。在提建议的时候吗，我们经常用到一些句型，如why not...， you should...， you’d better...等。注意语句之间的连接，使文章表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。首先作者先对Bob面临的这些问题给予理解，这是一个普遍的问题，并不是只有他自己碰到。然后作者给Bob提出了建议，如First,it’s not right to quarrel with your parents. I don’t think quarrelling can solve problems.，和父母争吵是不对的，这解决不了问题。然后You’d better have a talk with your parents.是建议他跟父母进行一次谈话。对于和哥哥之间的矛盾，作者也是建议他和哥哥好好谈一谈。从这一点上来说，这些建议有点重复，没有新意。但文章整体的表达还是很流畅的，文中的句式句型使用也很正确。像表示提建议的句型，作者就用到了why not...，you’d better, you should等。还有宾语从句和时间状语从句等。