Question

假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和来自英国的一位中学生Allen一起讨论了一个话题：the ways to learn English better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。
注意：1．开头和结尾部分已写好。
2．可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯通顺。
3．所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。
5．词数：90个左右。

Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. ___________________________________________________________
Liu Mei

Answer 1

Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain.In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimesseeing English films isn't a bad way.I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Best wishes.
Yours love
Liu Mei

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称和第三人称。
【亮点说明】这篇文章主要是我和Allen交流的学习英语的方法。文中使用了information，finally等较高级的短语和词汇，而且还应用了形容where引导的非限制性定语从句，动名词短语learning English grammar做主语等结构，为文章增色不少。全文连贯统一，具体表现在用“in his opinion”  “he also believes”  “however” “besides” “finally”等把全文连成了一个整体，使读者在欣赏的同时感觉畅快，从而认同作者的观点。