Question

假如你是Daniel，刚刚买了一张名叫“新中国60年”的教育光盘，根据下面所给信息，把它推荐给你的同学。要求包含所有要点，句子通顺，适当使用连接词，不少于80词。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Profile Name of game: New China’s 60 Years Number of levels: 6 Main character: Mr Chen Age: 70 years old Goal: Travel around China to know the great changes of China over the past 60 years. Love the country, love the hometown and make new China stronger and richer Area of study: Chinese history Setting: Different places around China Designer: Cao Jun Producer: Sunshine Educational CD-ROMs Co. Sold in: Xinhua Bookstores

  Hello, everyone! I would like to recommend you a new educational CD-ROM.______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I would like to recommend you a new educational CD-ROM. Its name is “New China’s 60 Years”. It has six levels.The main character of the game is Mr Chen. He is seventy years old. The goal of the game is to travel around China to know the great changes of China over the past 60 years and let the young people love their country,love their hometown and use their skills and wisdom to make new China stronger and richer. The game is set in different places around China. It is designed by Cao Jun and produced by Sunshine Educational CD-ROM Co. You can buy the CDs in Xinhua Bookstore.

试题分析: 这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇关于一张教育光盘的说明文。本文材料是一篇说明书，在动笔前要认真阅读这些内容，争取把主要内容都表达出来。结合材料可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态，注意时间状语与时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。