Question

文段表达。（10分）

根据中文和英文提示, 写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出, 其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华, 今年春节, 你的英国笔友杰克要来一个中国家庭做客, 他想知道中国人是怎样送礼物或者接收礼物的, 春节期间要遵守哪些特殊的习俗。请你根据他的问题, 给他回信提些建议吧。

提示词语: accept, immediately, break, clean

Dear Jack,

Nice to hear from you. _______________________________________________________

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I hope this helps and if you have any questions, just write to me again. Enjoy your stay!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

Nice to hear from you. I'm very glad to know that you’re coming to China for a short stay. I'd be happy to give you some advice.

When you visit a Chinese family, it’s a good idea to bring a small gift like fruits, tea, flowers, or something special from your country. Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return. In that case, you must accept it with both hands. Remember not to open it immediately but later.

Of all the festivals in China. the Spring Festival is the most important. There are some special traditions for you to follow. Try not to break anything. If you do, say “Suisuipingan” which means “be safe all the time”. You’d better not say the words “die, break, bad”. Besides, don’t clean your room on the first day of Chinese New Year, it will sweep away good luck.

I hope this help and if you have any questions, just write to me again. Enjoy your stay!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求告诉杰克中国人是怎样送礼物或者接收礼物的, 春节期间要遵守哪些特殊的习俗。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲：一 是否要带礼物。二 怎样赠与和接受礼物。三 春节期间应遵守什么样的传统习惯。写作提纲虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,回答了杰克的几个问题。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I'd be happy to give you some advice.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如When you visit a Chinese family, it’s a good idea to bring a small gift like fruits, tea, flowers, or something special from your country. If you do, say “Suisuipingan” which means “be safe all the time”. You’d better not say the words “die, break, bad”.等。

考点：提纲类作文。