Question

10．近年来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注．请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法．

常见中小学生健康问题

1．不重视健康问题；2．不吃早餐；3．常常看电视、玩电脑；4．有许多中学生不想运动；5．不与家人交流沟通；=6．有些男孩认为抽烟喝酒很酷；…

提示词：pay attention to（注意），communicate（交流）
要求：
1．陈述常见中小学生健康问题，谈谈怎样才能保持健康；
2．所给提示词须用上，词数80词左右
3．短文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名和地名．
Everyone wants to keep healthy today．               ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是陈述常见中小学生健康问题，谈谈怎样才能保持健康．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1常见中小学生健康问题：①．不重视健康问题；②．不吃早餐；③．常常看电视、玩电脑；④．有许多中学生不想运动；⑤．不与家人交流沟通；⑥．有些男孩认为抽烟喝酒很酷
2怎样才能保持健康；
常用到的重点短语：
pay attention to 关注
communicate with sb 与某人交流
have a rest 休息
take part in 参加
【高分句型】
1．Some of us go to school without breakfast in the morning．
without介词，没有…，后加名词代词或动名词．
2．Many boys think①②it is cool to drink or smoke．
①think 后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句
②it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
3．It is important for us to have good habits．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth．对某人来说做某事是怎么样的．it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 Everyone wants to keep healthy today．But we students don't pay attention to our health．（不重视健康问题）Some of us go to school without breakfast in the morning．【高分句型】（不吃早餐）Some students play computer games or watch TV too much，especially on weekends．（常常看电视、玩电脑）They don't want to do sports or communicate with their family members．（有许多中学生不想运动，不与家人交流沟通）Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke．【高分句型】（有些男孩认为抽烟喝酒很酷）
It is important for us to have good habits．【高分句型】We should eat breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play computer games for a short time，and then have a rest．We can also take part in some outdoor activities with our parents or friends．We should always keep communicate with the people around us．I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．（怎样才能保持健康）

点评 这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全．句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致．文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性．写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全．文中有一些好的表达方式如Some students play computer games or watch TV too much，especially on weekends．They don't want to do sports or communicate with their family members．等等